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Finished Script...a Tale Of Seven Spartans| a1gay1guy |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 03:48 AM
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| CRodplaya |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 04:32 AM
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looks good
I'll take Spartan Black |
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| CRodplaya |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 04:34 AM
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also, if you don't mind a bit of constructive Criticism:
I found a minor problem with your character names: I believe people will confuse the Elite Chief and MASTER Chief...I would recomend changing the Elite Chief's name |
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| scorchio17 |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 04:38 AM
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try renaming the Elite chief to Elite General
If I don't have my capture card ready by the time we do this (I should) I'll take elite chief |
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| scorchio17 |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 06:45 AM
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Oh, and i have some music ideas (yes, these are from other video games)
for the midship scene REVISED Ascension Battle theme (starts when the sniper shot is fired) Gemini Theme Elongation Battle theme(Starts when explosion is heard) Can't think of anything for the backwash scene NOTE: if you get an error when clicking a link, right click it, hit copy shortcut, and paste it into your browser |
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| nessdude15 |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 06:47 AM
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I'll take MC or Blue.
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| a1gay1guy |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 02:59 PM
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Yeah backwash will just be the normal backround with the rain that wporks perfectly i think...i like the other music though good job with that the elongation one is perfect. Sure the elites name can be changed to elite genreral, but im not going to go back and edit that last post from now on i'll just call him that and it will be understood for the first post it's suposed to be general wherever "chief" is... i thought it might be confusing with two chiefs too. Also if any of you passed by this in the ascension scene, i needed to come up with a name for ascension in this movie ascension is like a rest stop for banshees on their way to high charity, and i cant think of a good name for it and calling it ascension would be to dull. I said before i have no mic so i'll just be anything that has no lines...and hopefully we have at least 16 people in tihs clan because some of the final battles will definatly have 15 people in the camera view at once(if we have the numbers)
Oh yeah and I'll edit the rest and paste it here possibly by the end of the day |
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| BUNKERGOOSE |
 Posted: Jul 8 2005, 08:37 PM
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 The invasion force is here i'm ready are you? Group: Members Posts: 10 Member No.: 15 Joined: 4-July 05 |
can I be Snake? just send me a message to when taping starts.
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| CRodplaya |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 10:39 PM
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In my opinion, for any person who wants MC, there needs to be an application process...I will head the tryouts for those who want to be MC...because frankly, you gotta have a deep/cool voice to be him, and if not, our movies will be ruined
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| CRodplaya |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 10:44 PM
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The two first songs (Midship and ascension):
Those two songs sound too....cell phone-ringerish..if you don't mind me saying. The last two however have a very cool feel to them and I like those a lot. Also..I was thinking we could use the following song for the replacement of the Acension Battle Theme: There is a song called "In Keeping Secrets of Silent Earth 3 (Man your Battle Stations)" by Coheed & Cambria. It would work really well for a battle, and I would like to try it...I have no link, but if somebody could find one, it'd be nice of you |
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| a1gay1guy |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 10:45 PM
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| CRodplaya |
Posted: Jul 8 2005, 11:03 PM
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I'm so happy I get to be the bad ass...
 and Please DO NOT take what I am about to say the wrong way: We cannot have any people with high-pitched voices being one of the lead characters. People unfortunately will disrespect this company, and the movie if we do. I do not mean to hurt anybody's feelings, or discriminate, but frankly, I'm only saying this so this "company" can succeed...I'm talking about an action movie, but movies like MXC, its ok to have higher pitched people act in those. I'm sorry if I offended anyboyd, but I felt it had to be said |
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| mdugan49 |
Posted: Jul 9 2005, 01:13 AM
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I'll take white spartan
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| nessdude15 |
Posted: Jul 9 2005, 03:06 AM
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I'll take Black, Blue, or MC if my voice is good enough. I want black though.
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| a1gay1guy |
Posted: Jul 9 2005, 03:51 AM
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^ Well that Crodplaya guy called black a while ago sorry but if your vpice is good enough for MC you can definatly have him...and if not you can surely be blue...MC's voice i'm thinkin as close to the normal MC as possible if you want to have tryouts crodplaya...thatd be great...all the other voices don't really matter that much. White should be soft-spoken, and when writing the soldiers lines i was picturing them saying them in that australian/? accent like they do in campaign, if anybody can make that accent that would be awesome. But as one of the posts above says...high squeky voices are a big no no...maybe a soldier with only a couple lines...or officer orange he since he does not really say much...I'm almost done the last 5 scenes...I have 3 of them done and should have the rest done by this time tomorow at the very lastest...btw my computer runs pretty slow and downloading songs/finding them is not really easy for me so thanks alot for the help with the music everybody. This script is not FINAL FINAL ie if anybody has any suggestions about somethign that makes the movie turn out better in the end...feel free to speak up. Post the last 5 scenes soon if some one wants to be in charge of characters feel free im too busy revising the script to worry about that...i guess after the script is done we can figure that stuff out.
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