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Title: Yurame's Rival
Description: Needs Judging


yurame akio - April 8, 2006 03:21 PM (GMT)
SQing for the jutsu, didn't but them

Rewards:
Reppuu (Violent Wind), Senpuu (Whirlwind), LP

*Sounds of metal striking metal*

"Huff, Huff, Huff" The scene is in the forest surrounding the Town of Konoha and Yurame and his friend Fei Kinoharo are training on a pond (literally on the water) using kunai and whatever jutsu the have chakra left for. He drops back from the left slash, right slash combo that he tried on Fei. Fei, being the faster of the two, dodged the attack with no problem. Fei looks at Yurame from under his big white hair that always seems to get in front of his eyes. Yurame gets a good view of his friend, and he notices that they are both breathing hard - from either dodging or attacking his friend- before he rushes back in. Fei anticipated the move so he does some hand signals and he says “Body Flicker Jutsu!” and he disappears. Yurame stops and he looks around the battlefield. He decides that he’s using too much chakra so he moves off the water and on to dry land. That’s better he thinks to himself as he touches the land. He gets a good look around and he moves around the lake very carefully. He thinks he hears a kunai coming at him and he turns around just in time to block a kunai coming right at him. He puts his kunai up and the “kunai” is deflected. It bounces off his weapon and Yurame realizes that it was a rock. What? A Genjutsu? No that wasn't one, I'm just imagining things.
He moves into the safety of the forest and he jumps up into a tree to get another good look around. He decides to send a clone out into the woods to help look. “Clone Jutsu!” He sends the clone to the right while he scouts over to the left. As he gets to a huge rock he sees a shadow over to his right. He drops down out the tree and he sneaks up behind the shadow. He notices Fei’s big brown and yellow hair. He gets one foot behind Fei and he puts his hands in the form of a tiger and he says; “Sennen Goroshi (Thousand Years of Pain)!” He jabs his fingers into area’s that I don’t want to talk about and Fei shoots right up in the air yelling, “AHHHHHH!!!!!!! YURAME, YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!” Ha Ha Ha Ha!!!! He fell for it!!! He comes back down and he lands on the ground, face first. “I beat you, I beat you! “ Yurame dismisses the clone and he walks over to Fei to give him a hand to get up. Fei takes his hand and he fakes as though he’s going to get up, but he pulls Yurame on the ground and he beats him up. “You bastard! You put your finger in my ass!!!!!” *Thump! Whack! Crash!* Fei stands up over a now beaten Yurame. He points down at him. “Ha ha! Now I'VE beat YOU!” Fei walks over to his bag and he picks it up. Yurame gets up with a swollen lip. "Hey! You busted my lip!” He walks over to his bag and he picks his up as well.

Yurame and Fei walk back towards the village. While they walk, the duo hunt little squirrels and raccoons (mostly for the training with a kunai). They talk about what it’s gonna be like on their first mission and how big of a ninja their gonna be (show offs). “Yeah, your gonna be a chuunin before me? Ha! I’d like to see that.” Yurame says to Fei. “Whatever Yurame. Your full of it. I’m telling you, I’ll be a chuunin before you even get to take the exam. If I don’t I’ll give you my....” They both hear a loud sound from behind them. The look at each other then they jump up into opposite trees. They look around the area to see what it is and the see a group of bandits. The bandits don’t realize that Yurame and Fei are in the trees, so they decide to listen in on what the bandits are talking about. They silently move from tree to tree and whenever there isn't a tree close enough to jump to, they use the underbrush as cover. They soon start to hear the bandits speak of a hut where a old man that was once the First Hokage's assistant lives.

“Hey, Mick? Aren’t we supposed to go make that old dude like pay us for letting him use the forest?” The bandit that’s speaking is missing his left hand and he now wears a dagger in it’s place. He waves that hand a lot when he speaks. “Yeah! Muruga (the bandit leader) said that he owes up...” He pulls a piece of paper out of his pocket and he reads it. “He owes...2000 ryou.” That’s a lot of money! Both Yurame and Fei think at the same time. They follow the group of ninjas and they learn that the guy the bandits are looking for is two hours away. They also hear that the old man is 73 years old. Yurame has heard about this old man and he's heard that the old man was also once a well renown taijutsu user. He knows where the old man is suppose to live, but it was only a rumor considering he became a hermit after the First Hokage died. The path soon comes to a fork with paths leading west and north. Some of the bandits go down the one to the west while some go down the path to the north. Yurame and Fei jump out of the trees after the bandits leave. They talk about which way to go. "I'll go towards the west while you go to the north, okay Fei?" Fei nods his head and he runs off towards the north, leaving Yurame at the fork.

(Note that most of the following part is following Yurame's part, but there will be some parts describing Fei's part, too)

Yurame runs off towards the west and he soon hears the voices off the bandits again. He moves over to get behind a tree. He gets behind it and he gets down on one knee and he looks around the tree and he listens to the bandits talk.

"Yeah, Mick. So I was talking to Red and he said that this old geezer is a like a fighter or something like that." This is still the same bandit who lost his left hand.

"Yeah. That's what he said to me too." The bandits have stopped and they are taking a break. (Around by Fei the same thing is happening.) The bandits set up guards around the area. Yurame decides that this is his time to act. Yurame looks around for a guard and he sees one over to his left, and he jumps into the tree to get a better view. He follows the bandit while the bandit hums and the bandit soon takes a bathroom break. While he does that, Yurame drops down out of the tree behind the bandit. As the bandit zips up his pants and turns around, and the last thing he sees is a kunai slashing towards his throat. He drops down as a steady stream of blood pours down his neck. Yurame wipes the blade off on the bandits shirt and he walks off to find another bandit to kill. By now Yurame eyes have turned red and and he's now becomes his alter ego, "Akio", and he's feeling ready to fight. "Akio" finds another bandit back by the place where the other bandits have set up a resting site. He decides to study one of the bandits to make sure he'll be able to use the Transformation Jutsu correctly. He follows the bandit to accurately get his attitude down pact and his appearance. "Akio" finally gets enough studying and he decides that it's time for the bandit to be taken out. He runs around to one of the trees and the now sneaky ninja waits as the bandit comes around the corner. He's about to strike when another bandit comes over to the one that was about to be killed. "Akio" moves back into the shadow of a tree as he waits to get another chance to strike. That's it, time to act! "Akio" pulls out another kunai and he ties ninja wire through the holes. He steps around the tree and then throws both of the kunai so that they'll aim for the neck. The two kunai wrap around both of the bandits necks and he pulls back with all his might. He hears two loud snaps as the bandits necks snaps.

QUOTE
While "Akio" is killing bandits by cutting necks open, and being stealthy,  Fei is using jutsu to take his enemies out. He doesn't even bother using stealth because he is so fast. He runs through the forest throwing Lighting Balls at the bandits and he watches them fly back and he also uses Double Suicide Decapitation Technique to immobilize his enemies and he doesn't even leave their heads out of the ground, he just pulls them six feet under the ground.


"Akio" goes a few hand signs and he says "Transform!" and transforms into one of the bandits that was just killed. He walks back over to the group of bandits that are still resting and pumps chakra into his feet so he'll jump even higher. He gets to the middle and "Akio" jumps directly into the air and then does some more hand sings and after he gets twenty feet into the air, he yells out, "Goukakyuu no Jutsu , Great Fireball Jutsu!!!!" and sends flames roaring out of his lungs and the flames hit the group and they all catch on fire and starts to burn. "Akio" hears them yelling, but he doesn't pay any attention to them. He looks around and when he doesn't see anyone else, so "Akio" reverts back Yurame, and he continues on with looking for the old man. He walks through the forest and he wonders why he killed all of those bandits, when he could have just scared them away. Am I going crazy? He shakes the thought off his head and he starts to run towards the old mans house.

QUOTE
Fei has also finished his job, but as he walks away, he doesn't even think of the same things as Yurame; he actually has a smile on his face


As Yurame runs, he starts to see a river over to his left. He runs over to it and jumps into it to wash all of the "taint" of killing all those bandits. He tries to scrub it off, but it won't come off. He gets out of the river feeling disappointed in himself. He slowly walks off towards the First Hokage's assistants house.

QUOTE
As Fei walks along the path, he stumbles upon a group of bandits that all wear some armor that makes them look slow. Fei decides that he hasn't had enough fun yet, so he decides to kill them. Big mistake. He rushes at the bandits and it turns out they aren't bandits; their samurais. They all look towards him, and one of the small ones pulls out a extended windmill shuriken and he slashes at Fei with at a speed even he can't match. Fei gets a huge slash going down his chest. The samurai just walk away as though nothing happened and they leave Fei there to be discovered one hour later by the leader of the infamous "Team 16."


Yurame gets to the First Assistants hut one hour later, still wondering why the hell he killed all the bandits. He comes to one conclusion; necessity. If I didn't kill them, they would have killed me or the First Assistant. He comes up to the door and feels a little better knowing that he had to do it. Then a look of disgust comes over his face. If I can't kill bandits, people who destroy other people's lives and I suppose to kill my own father?! Man, I gotta get over this quick.

Yurame knocks on the door, but he gets no answer. "Hello?" He looks around and he doesn't see anyone. He knocks again. "Hello!" He decides that the old man isn't here when he hears from behind him, "I'm back here!" He turns and he walks over to the left of the house and he goes behind it. What Yurame sees behind the house is a field of flowers that couldn't be seen from the front of the house because all of the trees were blocking them. Wow. is all Yurame thinks as he looks at all of the different colors and smells. He sees reds, blues, yellow, purples, and some blacks off over to the back of the field. He walks around and forgets about the reason why he came here.

*Man clearing his throat*

Yurame turns around in surprise. "Oh, umm..." He looks at the man. The man who he thought was suppose to be 73 years old, looks like he's only 50. "Are you the one who was knocking on my door?" Yurame looks dumbfounded. "Huh? Oh, yeah, I came to tell you that a group of bandits were coming to attack you." The old man shakes his head. "That always happens..." He notices that Yurame clothes are wet and that he had some blood on his shoes and pants. "Wait, did you kill them?" He looks disappointed. "Well yes, they were coming to hurt you." "No, no , no, you shouldn't have done that. They always leave. I just talk them out of it." Yurame puts his head down, feeling ashamed. "Well, I know you meant good, but you must think before you act. I can talk my way out of and into things. Unless you forget, I was the First Assistant." Yurame picks his head up. "That’s true." The old man sighs. "Oh, yes by the way, just in case you forgot, my name is Walter Mizuma. You need a new change of clothes. And from the way that you got blood all over your clothes, I also think you need to train some more so, why don't you stay here for a week. I could train you. As a young man a Taijutsu expert, so I think I could train you to use one or two of the techniques I know." Yurame thinks about it, (by now he's forgotten all about Fei) and he says: "Okay. I do need some new moves. Plus, I like all of the flowers. Did you plant them all?" "Aww yes. That's why I look so young. I garden a lot and I make sure that they are well watered. If you'd like, you could help me...."

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One Week later

While Yurame stayed at the First Assistants house, he learned a lot of new stuff including two new jutsu; Reppuu, the Violent Wind. A technique that sweeps the enemy right off of their feet, and he's learned Senpuu, the Whirlwind, which sends a flying roundhouse kick to the opponent and it sends them flying back. Yurame regrett fully leaves Walters house after one week, but he knows that he has to return to his house and see if he has any thing waiting for him.

As he says his goodbyes to Walter, he knows that he's made a friend for life. He walks back towards his home in the woods, feeling better about his deed he did last week, and he feels stronger. He gets a half a mile from Walters home when he hears a loud explosion. Yurame turns around and he sees a huge fireball over Walters home. "WALTER!" He runs back towards Walters house and he sees his house on fire. He goes to the back yard hoping that Walters okay, when he sees Walter on his knees in front ofa figure, whos back is to Yurame, pleading for his life. "Please don't kill me, please!" the figure has a Long Spear held up in his hands. God, no! Walter! The figure raises the Long Spear and they thrust it directly inot Walters chest. "Please no don't do it! Arghh..." Walter gargles on blood and he falls over dead. "WALTER!!!!!!" Yurame's eyes turn blood red and he rushes at the figure. When the figure hears Yurame, he turns around and looks directly at him. Yurame sees his best friend, or now worst enemy, Fei. Yurame stops in his tracks. What the fu... Fei looks at Yurame and he pulls his Spear out of Walters chest. "Why Fei, why!?!?!" Fei starts a menicing laugh that chills Yurame to the bone. Fei turns around and he runs off towards the forest and he leaves Yurame there wondering why Fei would do such a thing. He realizes that his now dead friend is still laying there in the flowers that don't have that sweet smell to them any more; they now smell of evil and death. Yurame goes over to his body and he picks Walters corpse up. He turns around and he walks back towards the village, crying.

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Three Hours Later
(Seven at night and it's nearly pitch dark)
Yurame gets to the village and he walks through the streets and he takes the body up to the Ninja Acaemy to show the whole world what Fei Kinoharo has done to one of Yurames friends. He busts in the building, and he puts Wlaters cold stiff corspse on the front desk. "This is Walter Mizuma, the First Assistant to the First Hokage. I want everyone to see what Fei Kinoharo whas done to one of my best friends." Yurame leaves the body there and he walks home, wondering why Fei has done something so horrible.

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The Next Month in the Hokages office
A ninja, chuunin by the looks, arrives in the Hokages office. and he gives the Hokage a a letter. "Thank you." The ninja walks out. The Hokage opens it and it reads:

QUOTE
Good morning Sir,

This is from the office of Giruka Hurik, the head nijna in charge of security and the village Bingo Book. We'd like to tell you in advance that due to the sudden increase in deaths cause by the infamous gruop, "Team 16," the leader of this team and the mastermind behind these deaths, will now be a Class rank A in the Bingo Book. One ninja in the group, Fei Kinoharo, is now ranked B in the bingo book. He has caused the deaths of The First Hokage Assistant, Walter Mizuma, whose body was brought in by a ninja named Yurame Akio, and he has caused the deaths of tweleve other ninjas in the last four weeks alone. We'd like permission to send a group of ANBU out to handle Fei Kinoharo because we have reason to believe that he's coming out to attempt a suicide mission on you sir. Thank you for all of you time.

                                                                Head of Security and the Bingo Book,
                                                                                      Giruka Hurik


This team is becoming more and more arrogant and bold everyday. I'll approve for the ANBU to go out and handle the leader. I'll have someone else handle Fei. Hmmm, maybe I'll use Yurame. He was Fei's best friend, so he knows the most about him. I'll set the mission up after he gets done with the introductions for his team.

~END~


Rewards:

Reppuu (Violent Wind)
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: D Rank
Progression: Normal
Damage: 1/9 Taijutsu
Effect: +1 accuracy to the following attack
Cost: 24 Chakra
Acc: x1
Description: Using their quickness and agility, the user moves low to the ground and delivers a spinning kick to sweep the opponent off their feet.
Limit: None.

Senpuu (Whirlwind)
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: D Rank
Progression: Normal
Damage: 1/8 Taijutsu
Cost: 24 Chakra
Acc: x1
Description: Using their quickness and agility, the user charges at their target to execute a flying round house kick on those opponents within the range of attack.
Limit: None.

LP

yurame akio - April 10, 2006 03:02 PM (GMT)
Sorry to bump this, but I kind of need these jutsu for Team 7's Rivalries SQ. Thanks

Saipher - April 10, 2006 05:19 PM (GMT)
Since you really don't space your paragraphs, you cover the needed length for the jutsu! However, it isn't long enough for the LP. Good trainning though!

Rewards: Reppu + Senpuu




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