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 Genin Level Puppet, I hope I did this right
Kenpie Kaishu
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 06:34 PM


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(Side note: I followed how Hatsu did his. I hope its still current. If it is not, I will gladly go back back to the drawing boards.)

Name: Fainbi
Physical Description
Fainbi looks like it came right out of a sci-fi movie, being painted in a glossy black paint. It stands about four inches above Kaishu when on its hind legs, and a little over half of the boy’s height when on all fours. The hands are perfectly shaped to resemble human hands, except they are a little longer and end in claws. The face looks almost like a human as well, despite having fangs and no eyes in sight, as well as the little details that show the puppets inner mouth with a trap. The head stretches back to form a headdress that could reach down to its mid back when it tilts the head back.

The puppet’s deadliest feature is the curved blade on its tail that acts much like a clawed weapon. The tail itself is prehensile to a certain extent, allowing to grip onto objects when needed, but not onto opponents.

Vitality: 5

Custom Weapons:
Tail Claw
Damage: 1/13 Strength (1.5 Crit.)
Cost: 3 Chakra
ACC: +2
Special: Can be used in conjunction with Dokusatsu no Tsume
Description
Perched on the puppet’s tail is a small, curved blade that can skewer most objects that come within vicinity of it. The design is simple and based after that of a scorpion tail in more ways than one. Within the blade is a small hole that allows it to pump poison into its enemy.

Jutsu:
None as of yet.

# Compartments: 4/5 slots.
-Hands-
Cables
Weapon Type: Secondary
Rank: Genin Minimum
Damage: 1/15 Strength (2.0x Critical)
Cost: 9 Chakra
Acc: +3
Effect: Can restrain an opponent in place giving +2 accuracy to the following attack (does not require an action).
Limit: Puppet Only. 2 Slots

-Mouth-
Shuriken
Weapon Type: Secondary
Rank: Genin Minimum
Damage: 1/13 Strength (1.5x Critical)
Cost: 1 Chakra
Acc: +1
Description: Another common weapon, the shuriken is a ninja star type weapon that is often kept in a holster on the leg or in a pouch attached to the belt.
Limit: 2 Slots

300 - (200[Kunai] + 100 [Cables]) = 0


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Ten
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 06:50 PM


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A. Do you know those jutsu already?

B. Once you teach a puppet techs, it keeps them forever so you know.


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Kenpie Kaishu
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 06:53 PM


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Oh, I gotta know them. I thought the puppet could learn them? And yes, I know that it stays forever when a puppet learns a tech.


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Ten
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 07:02 PM


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They can, but you have to SQ for them. o.< {My puppet actually doesn't even have any jutsu...lol. And I h4ck'ed the system with my clan too. o_O;}

Anyways...I'm guessing that's a custom weapon? Either way the acc needs to be static. No higher than two. Damage can come up to about 1/13 I'd think. If so, bring the cost to 3 chakra.

Or you can make the acc +2 and just leave the rest as is.


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Kenpie Kaishu
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 07:08 PM


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Ok, the weapon was fixed. I'll get the Jutsu for it later on if you don't mind.

(Aside: Soon my "Alien Invader" series will begin.)


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Ten
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 07:09 PM


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Acc still needs to be static. Not x1. Either 1 or 2. o_O; And with the upped damage your cost per swing is gonna be....2 if you leave acc at 1. Or it's gonna be 3 if you up your acc to 2.


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Kenpie Kaishu
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 07:11 PM


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I really have to stop reading half of everything. Its going to get me in trouble one day.


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Ten
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 07:26 PM


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Kentei!


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Kenpie Kaishu
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 07:44 PM


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How many other approvals do I need?


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Ten
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 08:04 PM


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Twoooooo.


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lethyl
Posted: Sep 2 2007, 09:36 PM


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Awwe a puppeteer =) hopefully you don't die like the rest hehe. I don't see any problems so I approve.


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