Part one of: A lot, Two Sage items...

AHAHAHAHA these are the SEX!!!

You don't have Sage-ranked equipment on the SP lists; however I noticed that the SP went up by increments of 5 for every rank, so at sage I've assumed it's twenty-five for the face and fifty for the body. If you have a problem with this, then you must attempt to logick your way out.

Um, could I allow this coat to have two additional slots since it's really big and probably has pockets?

Genjutsu can't be dodged/blocked so don't ask me if the specials for both of them refer to genjutsu.

In the rules page that talks about clothing and stuff, I noticed there's no colon after Limit and there's no spot for description. O_o; Please fix that.

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Go look. Sage rank equipment is there. >_>

No, you can't have +5/-5 all the time. I'll only allow +2, or -2, or +1/-1 (MAAAYBE +3). Why? Because having bonus ACC like that and not having to pay for it is total crap. +5 ACC would make all your attacks almost 50% harder to dodge, and -5 would make almost 50% harder to hit. Just because they're Sage Rank doesn't mean they can have mega good effects.

No, your coat can't give you more item slots, and it shouldn't be able to block S-Rank jutsu... I'm also iffy on how many stats it should be allowed to recieve with that effect you've given it. Oh, and the UPS don't exist in Naruto...

You could just keep your dagger in your "Scroll Pack" you know. I think this sheath might have to replace your scroll pack, but I could be wrong ...

...I can make my own, can't I?

Go watch Samurai Champloo. I <3 Mugen's sheath, and I wanna have something like it.

1. Kay.
2. What if I said "as many times as the user has slots"? XD Nah, I'll say "any one A-rank and below."
3. 'tis a special, not an effect.
4. I meant UPC. Edited accordingly.

+3/-3 it is, then.

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I'm assuming the dagger's fine, then?

dagger cost up to 8 chakra per swing
beef up the description

both the face paint and the coat will need fixing. As it see it you either drop the effect/special (in this case you're disguising an effect as a special) in both and go with full SP or drop most of the SP and go mostly effect. Can't do both I'm afraid.

Kay on the dagger.

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Oh, I was thinking this was sorta an RP thing making it a special. I'll fix it.

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I dropped some of the SP. I'll drop another 5 from the face stuff to cut it in half. Sound good? On the coat, I'll drop 20 SP.

Fix'd everything, I think. Dropped the SP all 'round.

I said and meant +3 OR -3. Not +3/-3. Why the hell would I put +1/-1 and then say "maaaybe +3" and actually mean for you to make it +3/-3. You aren't stupid Hideake. Stop playing dumb.

Coat looks like an effect to me ... Drop the stats to 20...

You realize you could buy a scroll pack, put your dagger in it and weild your sword, and simply RP the dagger so that it's inside your sword right?

This post has been edited by Fate x Lain on May 12 2007, 05:30 PM

Not playing dumb. Playing it like this is sage-rank shit here; you're not.

I dropped the stats on the coat far enough. Again, this is SAGE RANK. I can change it to effect.

Yeah, but that would ruin the jutsu I've got planned for it.

Glass dagger... in sheath is fine sheath takes up 2 spots in equip pouch 1 for sheath and 1 for dagger^^

hmmm head piece... the description doesn't really explain how it allows you to auto dodge ANY ONE attack... it is kinda saying it can because i said so... also i am going to agree that this has to be knocked to +1/-1 ACC it costs nothing and it is always in effect.... unless you would like to add a drawback such you lose 25% more dodge stat with each dodge then i will contemplate letting it be something like +2/-2

the coat can have 2 slots but it will cost you 4 stat points 2 for each slot... and those 2 will just be added to the equip pouch like an expansion...(i'm getting creative here)

and i think you are confusing Sage equiment with legendary equipment Sage equip is equal to A rank jutsu not S Legendary would be the equivelent to S

...can you clear the grammar a bit?

The narcotic frees up your movements and shit; I don't know exactly how to explain it. It's a performance enhancing drug. I'll try explaining it when I get back from the Doctor's office.

...it cost me 1,000 to buy; I think that's an arseload.

Four is a nasssssty number. So I could put the sheath on my coat and it'd be cool?

*shrugs* Not much of a difference; all of them are fucking powerful.

I dropped half my SP for the face stuff (that's a LOT since I'm thinking it was 30; if it was 20, I'll drop 5 more).

I dropped 20 SP from the 50 SP for the clothing, which should be fine. If you'd like, I'll drop 5 more points to keep the rest as-is.

...can you clear the grammar a bit?

okay... You may have the glass dagger take up NO slot (technically) since it will be part of the sheath. The sheath however will take up 2 slot's in equipment pouch (think secondary weapon) it will take up ONE for the sheath and ONE for the Dagger^^ badabing TWO ^^

The narcotic frees up your movements and shit; I don't know exactly how to explain it. It's a performance enhancing drug. I'll try explaining it when I get back from the Doctor's office.

okay i'll wait to read that ^^

...it cost me 1,000 to buy; I think that's an arseload.

but still a 6ACC modifier for no cost that last's an entire battle...is well....BEYOND S RANK JUTSU.... but i'll let someone else harp on that ^^

Four is a nasssssty number. So I could put the sheath on my coat and it'd be cool?

yep if you wanted the slot's it would be a special/effect and you would recieve only a few less stat points... four may be a bit much your right maybe just 1 stat modifier point per slot added... and yes because you get 2 extra slots you can put your sheath in the jacket.... this is kinda moot now tho so you can add it in as a special that you get 2 extra equipment slots on the jacket since you dropped the stat points already^^

*shrugs* Not much of a difference; all of them are fucking powerful.

^^ Sage rank= a shit load of C4.... Legendary= Nuclear Bomb
yes both powerful but i would rather not be in the same city as the later one^^

hmmm.... still face paint is the only real problem everything else looks okay^^

I can't think of a good description right now. If I drop the Special, can I keep the +3/-3? I'd think it's a fair trade.

Your special is still iffy as is... as it is currently it can block an s rank but still it can only work one time a battle and there is no way you are keeping that unless you have it that you lose vit or chakra every turn ... which is something you may be against and even if you would do that i forgot to say that you have to make the special the same as the coat.... it can't effect S rank jutsu

what you are doing is asking for jutsu that would
-give you a 6 ACC modifier that would cost 27 chakra per use
-and a shield jutsu that should cost around 100 to use IF IT ONLY BLOCKED A rank and below
and you are asking for them for free... you see why it won't pass like that?

Waiting til the staff continues as predicted.