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SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 12 2005, 10:03 PM


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Okay, okay, here's a weird fanfic me and ss1Pan made.

Gohan Teaching Videl to Fly: episode four: Meet Link

Gohan and Videl were flying when they saw a strange church in a strange town. They entered the church. A boy stood inside in front of a sword. He pulled the sword and all three of them were thrown seven years into the future. (Except Gohan and Videl stayed the same age...'cause we want them to stay the same age.)
Older Link turned around and saw Videl. He walked to her and put his finger under her chin, "What a pretty lady to exist at such a time." He said smiling charmingly. "Sorry, I'm with Gohan!" Videl yelled pointing at Gohan. "LINK!" said some guy that was dreessed almost like a mummy. "You need to--who the fuck are you!" he yelled. "We...uh...are lost." Gohan said. The guy threw something at the ground which exploded into smoke and he disappeared. He reappeared next to Link and smacked his hand away from Videl. "LOST IS NOT A GOOD EXCUSE!" The guy yelled. "Oh, well, me and Videl were just flying...well that's what my mom thought...we were actually running away, because my mom thinks I like Videl and she disaproves. And so we flew here and found this church.....and that guy...was a kid when we came..." Gohan explained. Link grabbed Videl's hand to kiss it, "Well if they disaprove.." his eyes sparkled. Videl smacked him away, "NOT IN YOUR LIFETIME, BUB! Besides in reality, you're too young for me." Videl said. Gohan suddenly realized what was going on, "HEY, SHE'S MINE!" Gohan yelled pulling up his sleeve to punch Link. "Whoooaaa, tough guy!" Link said sarcastically as he pulled out his sword. Gohan grabbed Link by his earing and pulled him. Sadly Gohan yanked off his ear. "Aaaaaaaaahh!" Link yelled. "C'mon, you wanna fight, bitch!" Gohan yelled. "G-Gohan..." Videl said shocked. "What?! You wanna take this outside!?" yelled Link. The strange mummy-like guy punched him, "There's no time for that right now!" he said. "I bet we can make time!" Link yelled. Gohan tackled him and drove his face into the pavement. "GOHAN!" screamed Videl, "THAT'S ENOUGH!" Gohan set Link down before he had thrown him at that...guy. The guy pulled off his costume revealing him ::ahem:: herself as princess Zelda. "I can't work with this!" she yelled as she stormed off to her dressing room....crying. "Zelda?" said Link. "Okay....let's leave." said Gohan to Videl. "y-yeah." she replied. So they flew off into the sunset happily, WAIT! Rewind that to where they were leaving. "I'll get you!" Link yelled, "That's it!" he pulled out a lightsaber, "I am now going to be called Darth......hm...I never really thought about this." Gohan grabbed Link's sword and chopped off his head. Okay, now they fly off into the sunset happily, and for Gohan, covered in blood.

THE END


Just tell me how weird it is! But you gotta admit, some of it is funny. laugh.gif


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ss1Pan
Posted: Jul 12 2005, 10:04 PM


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lol i think that might be one of the best....but of course, wut does everyone else think?


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SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 12 2005, 10:18 PM


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If you like it we'll post more of them, if you don't....well I don't care.


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ss1Pan
Posted: Jul 12 2005, 10:21 PM


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lol yea.....if u dont like it its nothing to me, i mean cum on i said it was retarded anyway. biggrin.gif


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ssjlegend
Posted: Jul 13 2005, 11:57 AM


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lol, u guys r weird, i found the funny part at the end of it where u said "rewind that to the last part" not a direct quote but hey I tried to remember, well anyways good job, but u need to work more on some grammer and try to explain somethings more throughly, haha enough for my lessons I gotta go and get dressed its already one lmao


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Posted: Jul 13 2005, 12:44 PM


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lol yea...we were just writing that in the middle of the night and it seemed funny then. lol biggrin.gif


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SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 13 2005, 12:45 PM


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The grammer I was being sloppy on. I know how to write it's just it wouldv'e taken a lot longer to write.


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Posted: Jul 13 2005, 07:37 PM


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i c


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"I save the woman, I lose the baby, I save the baby, I lose the woman... I WASN'T READY TO PLAY GOD TODAY!"- Lewis Kiniski(Ryan Stiles)- The Drew Carey Show
SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 13 2005, 09:25 PM


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I'm writing a real fanfic now. It'll be better than that one me and ss1Pan wrote. Besides, that one was supposed to be funny.


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ssjlegend
Posted: Jul 14 2005, 12:01 AM


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yeh i kno that, I'd love to read ur samurai one tho. and uh, if ya guys want i'll post some of my fan fic... but i dun know if u'll like it, its mostly "Early Edition"(if you've ever heard of that show) unsure.gif


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"I save the woman, I lose the baby, I save the baby, I lose the woman... I WASN'T READY TO PLAY GOD TODAY!"- Lewis Kiniski(Ryan Stiles)- The Drew Carey Show
SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 14 2005, 10:48 AM


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Uh...I've never heard of it before.....
I can post the first chapter of my book soon...I guess, it's kinda got a DBZ-like humor to it though......but not like that retarded fanfic we wrote.....


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ssjlegend
Posted: Jul 14 2005, 11:23 AM


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nah its ok, i won't post it laugh.gif but hey! who cares! laughter can go a long way in a book! happy.gif


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"I save the woman, I lose the baby, I save the baby, I lose the woman... I WASN'T READY TO PLAY GOD TODAY!"- Lewis Kiniski(Ryan Stiles)- The Drew Carey Show
SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 14 2005, 11:54 AM


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I'll need to go through my book and fix the mistakes, then I'll post it. I'm sure you can write good fanfics though!


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ssjlegend
Posted: Jul 14 2005, 12:04 PM


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Hey thnx happy.gif.

Can't wait to read urs!


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"I save the woman, I lose the baby, I save the baby, I lose the woman... I WASN'T READY TO PLAY GOD TODAY!"- Lewis Kiniski(Ryan Stiles)- The Drew Carey Show
SS4 Trunks
Posted: Jul 15 2005, 05:21 PM


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yeah....if it's any good........


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