Phantom

[Phantom]

Name: Phantom
Gender: Stallion
Age: 6 years
Breed: thoroughbred

Apperance: (2 paragraph)
Phantom is a blakc as the night with no markings. His eyes seem to be blacker but are really dark blue. His coat holds no markings, but holds all kinds of scars, One huge one on his neck tells his and his daughhter's fight.
He is taller than most thoroughbreds, at 17.3 hh. It's he that .speed gets her stregth. His banner is the shadowed, as well as his tresses. His body, like a shire with his robust form.

Personality: (1 Paragraph)
He's an evil bastard who would hate to even see one light. Episcally his daughter. He would rather live lonely, than ever see a puny light again. Lights and lovey dovey darks are what get him mad the most. His heart has been closed. He will never reopen it again.

History: (2 paragraph)
When born he was light, he was always a playful colt. Playing with the others. When two he went to a bachelor herd, but soon left after defeatng another stag. He lived as a light for three peaceful years.
But one dark day, when all fourteen of his mares had finished, having their babes, the yearlings from last year still there. He turned. He killed all but one, Speed-Dee. They had engaged in battle, but he being weak from fighting all the others, she overtook him. She thought she had killed him, but hadn't. Now he came here, seeking his last heirs death.

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[White Raven]

Please do a bit more. It's not hard, just picture him in your mind's eye and pick out every little detail possible. And for the personality, for example what makes him angry? What makes him happy? How does his mood vary, and when? And mares wouldn't have foals on exactly the same day, it'd be more spaced out depending on their breeding. I doubt a stallion would be able to mate with fourteen mares in one day. Pick out what happened to him as a foal, as a yearling, as a young stallion, and as mature.

[Phantom]

K I fixed it up. *Salutes* Now off to go kill Speed cause shesaid nothing about this.