I want to know your opinions and see how I can improve.

Right now, it's not much, but what do you think so far?

§/10

I saw that. What's my real rating?

9/10

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1 Soil


Um...8/10, but I can't rate it with that little issues.

9/10, huh? That's great, but is there anything you liked, anything you think I could improve on?

9/10 More me time!
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*Straps on Royal Spear, Solar Gauntlet, Studded Gauntlet, Gai-cloak and Gai-crown as well as sandals* Behold! I have become Zach Proja! *Megaman power obtained music starts playing* *Rest of users sweatdrop*

*flies over in flying machine heli and fires all weapons to wreak havoc*

O...k...

You can't do that!

*Andy puts on Falcon Armor v2 and dismantles flying machine*

It's good to have a mechanic in the comic.

*machine is not dismantled*
it's made in a way in which the only wayt o get rid of it is to destroy it,it's futuristic.

O RLY?

*Andy puts several Crash Bombs on the flying machine*

3...2...1...

KABLAM.

*machine shrinks bombs to a harmless size*

Let's get back on topic. Dragmace, delete your posts before we get warned for spamming.

XD at Silas's mind.

You know where the "I like swords" quote is from, right?

No. >_>

"Hi, I'm master4sword. *kicks empress* I like swords. *kicks empress* I also like kicking empress bulblax. *kicks empress*

8-bit Theater, a sprite comic about Final Fantasy. In my point of view, it has NOTHING to do with Final Fantasy except for the characters and one part of the storyline.

I stopped reading it because it grew boring though.

XD/10

I don't feel like dealing with numbers right now, but it IS funny.

Oh, by the way...

Andy: Mechanical wizard. Not exactly what you'd call intelligent (What's a continent? What's a nanny? If I recall correctly, he even managed to forget how to capture properties somewhere in AW1...), has Mechanics for a Hit, Waking up Early for a miss. Bland stats (100%Attack, 100% Defense), heals HP with his CO Powers.

Take a look at the main characters thing in the first post of the comics topic. He likes 1337 speak. 1 m34n, wh0 w0uldn'7?

h3y, h3'5 r19h7! 7h15 15 fu|\|!

Oh, that's for the original Andy. Not that he can't change for a sprite comic. <_<

8|_|7 |234311y, \/\/|-|47'5 4 |¯0|\|71|\|3|\|7?

Andy: Hey, I can't handle Advanced 1337 yet! I can only replace letters with numbers, not symbols!

A continent? Is that some sort of pie?

Hey, wait...I'm not stupid! </quote from BnG>

1 4/\/\ /\/07 |-)4|) 47 1337.

>_>

Review from Dragmace:

Dragmace
Posted: Oct 22 2005, 01:40 PM
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This is just a review.Please don't delete this.
Good start so far!
Just, Add a hypnotism Gun.
apart from that,great!
oh,and the rating!
9/10!
(Yes, I do use grammar in reviews for this.)
And you may add comics not to do with the plot so we have something new.


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be nice

No hypnotisim guns, however, you have another method of getting members on your side...

Well, How about Shaman form? Just convert the sprite you use for me into something like the shaman in my avatar!

Er, I can't make sprites, but you do have a Force Armor upgrade.

Exact quote of DM's review.

Well, I've made 20 comics. Which one is your favorite?

Someone rate please.

Favorite one...hmm...

Legos guest comic. >_>

Um...I don't know, the one I'm in. >_>

Okay...I'll decide later.

Lego's new guest comic: Nice, but it lacks mechanical frogs, guys with wrenches swearing like a trucker, censorship, purple ninjas, and blue Protomen dropping E-tanks. *shot*
Yeah, I'm bored.

O_o

I love the fact that Artemis has hijacked the comic.

Not "hijacked", per se, it's just an added feature. Pretty soon, other characters will be taking advantage that they can appear...OUTSIDE...of the comic. =O =O =O

500th post for this forum!

Alternate Inferno and Atomic Inferno have the same initials... I'm slow.

Anyway, I like the comic, but please don't use so many BnG jokes. >_<
They just don't make me laugh. The Andy-hating-clones thing is funny, though.

8/10

*Gasps* *chokes* *dies* DM... used... Grammar...?

Hey, BnG jokes is a LOT better than the things I come up with, but I'll try.

Ok. I know that coming up with jokes is hard, so you can use BnG jokes, but try to find something somewhat different now and then.

I thought that was funny, I'd like to see stuff like that. Just maybe not Meteos related. Unless Dalaw came up with it. >_<

*forgot something*

Make Dragmace a bit more realistic. Make him talk the way he posts here. I think that would be funny. Or maybe just scary.