im deciding to make my own sprite comic. hopefuly it will come out good
this is the teaser/cover whatever its called. i have some sprites to start out.

basicly this comic will be making fun of kingdom hearts. i game which i can't stand.

why name it kingdom trees? because i said so >_>

so this is the begining of my embarrassment spriting career

Kingdom trees

Part #1
The begining of further retardation


Authors comments: this is my first ever sprite comic. so i had no idea what to do.. so it may suck... but ill do my best to make better ones.

Auth

... *stabs eyes out*

This.

...Holy hell, Lego and I agreeing?

Okay fine, how about constructive criticism.

When making a parody, you don't make people go "lol i am newb and dumbass". That's not funny. Neither are effects like *Lame portal noise* or *Lame portal effect* "I AM AUTHOR FEAR ME". They might seem funny, and will make some 8 year olds laugh. But they aren't really funny. Parodies generally tend to go, "Hey, everybody. I'm Sora. Behold as I attack the darkness! *Kills heartless*"

You know, don't make the character sound like a moron while trying to make the thing you're making a parody of sound moronic. It's kinda like... Go read a transcript of Monty Python and the Holy Grail, or something like Mad TV. Those are decent examples.

Mad TV is a decent example of what NOT to do. Seriously.

That's what I meant. >_>

Monty Python is decently funny, but don't apply that to a sprite comic.


Edit: Also, Knights of Cydonia sucks.

I think the best constructive criticism is to not write a sprite comic at all

unless it's a gem such as this:

http://encyclopediadramatica.com/The_Legend_of_Razor