Title: Kingdom Trees
Description: a sora to the past
betrayer-of-kamigawa - January 12, 2008 02:24 AM (GMT)
im deciding to make my own sprite comic. hopefuly it will come out good
this is the teaser/cover whatever its called. i have some sprites to start out.
basicly this comic will be making fun of kingdom hearts. i game which i can't stand.
why name it kingdom trees? because i said so >_>
so this is the begining of my
betrayer-of-kamigawa - January 12, 2008 05:25 AM (GMT)
The begining of further retardation
Authors comments: this is my first ever sprite comic. so i had no idea what to do.. so it may suck... but ill do my best to make better ones.
Drifting Swordsman - January 12, 2008 09:30 PM (GMT)
Robtcee13 - January 12, 2008 09:44 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (Drifting Swordsman @ Jan 12 2008, 04:30 PM)|
| ... *stabs eyes out* |
...Holy hell, Lego and I agreeing?
Robtcee13 - January 12, 2008 10:32 PM (GMT)
Okay fine, how about constructive criticism.
When making a parody, you don't make people go "lol i am newb and dumbass". That's not funny. Neither are effects like *Lame portal noise* or *Lame portal effect* "I AM AUTHOR FEAR ME". They might seem funny, and will make some 8 year olds laugh. But they aren't really funny. Parodies generally tend to go, "Hey, everybody. I'm Sora. Behold as I attack the darkness! *Kills heartless*"
You know, don't make the character sound like a moron while trying to make the thing you're making a parody of sound moronic. It's kinda like... Go read a transcript of Monty Python and the Holy Grail, or something like Mad TV. Those are decent examples.
Maltese - January 13, 2008 02:14 AM (GMT)
Mad TV is a decent example of what NOT to do. Seriously.
Robtcee13 - January 13, 2008 02:39 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (Maltese @ Jan 12 2008, 09:14 PM)|
| Mad TV is a decent example of what NOT to do. Seriously. |
That's what I meant. >_>
Monty Python is decently funny, but don't apply that to a sprite comic.
Edit: Also, Knights of Cydonia sucks.
Storm - January 18, 2008 04:22 PM (GMT)
I think the best constructive criticism is to not write a sprite comic at all
unless it's a gem such as this:http://encyclopediadramatica.com/The_Legend_of_Razor