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 So now I guess I'm writing things.
Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 7 2008, 12:30 AM


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Check out my deviantART page, located at http://robtcee13.deviantart.com/

Post comments here, if you want to comment. Just type the name of what you're commenting on, then your comment. I'll reply to each one.

I'd like constructive criticism please.
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 7 2008, 10:46 PM


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A new piece of literature has been added.

Now comment, lazy asses.
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Storm
Posted: Nov 8 2008, 08:00 AM


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I ran to my dresser and nearly tripped. Great, I thought to myself, I'm gonna be one of those clumsy girls. I dismissed it as me not quite being used to little differences in my body. That, and ignorantly not trying to find said differences. I sorted through a variety of boring clothes before I found a thin, loose, tall shirt to wear, and my smallest pair of jeans.

ho-ho-holy shit you're gay
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 8 2008, 01:16 PM


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Or I was suddenly a girl and my old self never updated his wardrobe.
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Storm
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 04:38 PM


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no, you're fucking gay

YOU are gay
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 05:35 PM


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That, or as I've SERIOUSLY come to suspect, Rob is actually a girl. >_>
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 05:44 PM


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I am not gay, nor am I a girl.

I just happen to only have one pair of jeans that fit me well. That's what I meant in the story. >_>
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Storm
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 06:22 PM


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you're writing a first person narrative where the main character, who has a strong desire to become a woman, transgenders into a woman

in your neurotic state it's obvious that you're trying to reach out to yourself by writing these complex stories about your ideal self. you then reject these principles out of perceived notions of manliness (hence why you force yourself to keep trying to talk to girls), contributing to your emotional problems

trust me i'm gay/bi and a psych major i know this shit ok
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 07:57 PM


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Okay, you're obviously missing the point of the story. He wakes up a girl is what happens. I write in first person/past tense because that's what comes naturally for me.

And I don't keep trying to talk to girls. Just one specific one. And since when have you ever given me good advice?
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 08:18 PM


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Oho.

That's why Storm keeps thinking he can tell my mental state when he actually can't. Like, at all. Any attempt he's made has been so far off target he might have been aiming in the opposite direction of the target itself.
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 08:23 PM


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I have something to add. If I were gay or transsexual, I would've figured this out when I went through that phase that I didn't know who I was. Basically, the whole period of time where I was wandering around here bitching about being depressed.
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Storm
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 11:30 AM


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the only reason you thought it a good idea to write the fic in the first place was because YOU YOURSELF liked the idea of becoming a girl, and being trapped in another gender's body. you don't just write about things you clearly have no affinity with on a whim, it doesn't happen

for fuck's sake, you even named the main pre-genderswap character "Robert"
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 02:11 PM


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I know that. It's about myself and the idea's been in my head for a long time. The thing is, I kinda outgrew that, realizing that I liked girls more than the idea of being one.
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 05:14 PM


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So, according to Storm's logic, if I wrote a story about a character with the same name as me going on a killing spree, it's because I want to go on a killing spree?

Pfffffffft. Fail logic is fail. I'm too much of a wuss in real life to face up to the consequences of going on an actual killing spree. ^_^
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 05:50 PM


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Unless you had nothing to live for. >_>
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 05:55 PM


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Still too much of a wuss. ::D

LEGO, I WILL UNLEASH THE FUCKING FURY IF YOU DO NOT ADD THE FLEEPING SMILEY.

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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 07:32 PM


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So if you had nothing to lose and wanted to die, you still wouldn't go on a killing spree? I mean, I know I'm too much of a wuss, but you?
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 07:56 PM


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Well, if I WANTED to die, then I'd just kill myself, I don't need to ruin everyone elses lives in the process.
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 07:58 PM


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This seems completely out of character for you, seriously.
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 08:01 PM


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Maybe if you think I'm even remotely like my online persona. My mannerisms online are all sorts of different to my mannerisms in real life.

Thus why Storm can never form an accurate impression of what I'm like. :D
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Storm
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 08:43 PM


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TUM, you practically scream "compensation" in all of your posts, it's obvious you're a passive-aggressive wuss IRL (this, on top of all your introverted little RPing habits)

sorry, I guess you're not unique boo hoo :[
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The Ultramind12
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 08:52 PM


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Good god, are you just purposely aiming away from the target? Because you're not hitting it in the slightest.
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Robtcee13
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 09:37 PM


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Not meaning to backseat mod, but we went from off-topic to WAY off-topic. You want a flame war, do it in PMs or Spam-A-Lot, not in my topic.
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