Poetry, Poems u might have written

[Dr. Nefarious]

I dunno about u guys, and most people think it's g*y, but sumtimes wen i'm bored i write poetry. Don't get me wrong, i am not a fag or anything but i'm really good at English sooo i make poems sometimes

here is a short piece i wrote recently;

We are strong, we are swift. With prowess we deliver our deadly gift!
We inflict pain, we make them suffer. When they are sleign, we move on to another!
Do not cross us, or your fate will come around. And there you will lie, dead on the ground.

[Black Knight]

It's very good but um just 1 question. Whats this supposed to relate to?

[Dr. Nefarious]

Oh yeah sorry... lol. It is meant to relate to the Dark Elves on Warhammer (if any of u know what warhammer is...)

[Skuld Fan]

Nice piece of work there!
@Black Knight.. LOL.. It doesn't have to relate to anything.. XD
It's just creativity.. XD

[final fantasizer]

poetrys jus mindless crap 2 me, only poetry i can right is rhyme

[Dr. Nefarious]

I wrote this yesterday... What duz everyone think?

Time, a strange presence, now means nothing to me.
I long for my death. I want to set my soul free.
Because now that my loved one has passed away,
It seems that loneliness is here to stay.

My life is not worth anything to me any more,
Because all of my wishes were washed out the door,
When everything that meant something to me,
Was killed off, by time, and is now history.

I want to be with you, my loved one,
In your death bed.
I don’t want to be alone,
I’d rather be dead.

Now that you’ve gone I’m an empty shell, cracked.
But I still love you! And there’s no changing that.
I didn’t want it to happen this way!
Why did you not wake up on that cold winters day?

My pain will not heal, for ever so long,
I want to talk to you again, and put right what was wrong,
I cannot put up with this torment for much longer,
Oh speak to me, please, your love makes me stronger.

I have waited for years with no answer from you,
Not a word, nor a sign, or even a clue,
As to why you left me, why you gave in,
To deaths evil hand with which he commited this sin.

I have decided to join you, six years have passed,
Don’t worry baby, I’m coming, fast!
My gun is loaded, and the bullet is fired,
And that is the end, of my sweet suicide… :’(

THE END

[Black Knight]

Wow nice. How long did it take you to write that? It's excellent.

[Dr. Nefarious]

Ummmm... lets see, about an hour. Maybe a litlle more. I have loads more in the making, i got back into poetry a couple of days ago.