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Title: Own Characters
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Lady Assasin Moonbeam - August 11, 2005 08:49 PM (GMT)
Hello fellow D. B. C. A. members :) This is the place where writers from all over the world can display original characters of their fanfictions, and comment on others. Here's an example.

Name: Alyssa

Story: "Murderer's Delight" For: "The Phantom of the Opera"

Hair: Long and black

Eyes: Dark brown

Personality: She's normally a calm, quiet girl, but if something tragic happens to her, her alter ego, Melissa, takes controll. Melissa is a violent and unstable personality who was developed after Alyssa's foster family was murdered.
(For those of you who have read "Murderer's Delight", you will get to know Melissa in my next chapter)


That's my character :) Feel free to post yours as well.

Yours Faithfully

Lady Assasin Moonbeam

Nightshadesister - August 12, 2005 02:40 AM (GMT)
I have one original character-

Lathril-

Story- Damn! I'm A Mary Sue (LotR)
Hair- Brown
Eyes- Golden Brown
Personality- Just like me, a bit nuts, prone to fighting with people for no apparent reason, her personality is better understood by reading about her on FF.net



reltistic - August 19, 2005 02:43 AM (GMT)
I have two original characters! Woo! Haha.
If you've read my fic "Thoughts of a Seemingly Raving Lunatic", there is Freddie, our beloved talking candelabra. Okay, well, he died. Unfortunately. Erik crashed him against the mirror on his way out of the lair when being chased by the mob.

Weep, my friends, weep.
Okay, I'm scaring you.

My other original character is Dianna.
She's from Phantom Day Care.
She can be very selfish, and self-centered, bossy, jealous. Okay, those are only her bad traits. She's really nice most of the time, and caring towards Erik, but I don't really plan to get the two romanced. It just doesn't seem to fit. xP

Erik: I agree. Besides, the idea of you playing 'Matchmaker' is simply horrific.

Marek: That's not very nice. She's only trying to help. -lifts up his broadsword-

Erik: Yeah, yeah, get your medievel crap away from me...

Sigh. Stubborn muses...

eriksmistress - August 23, 2005 05:39 AM (GMT)
right now i'm working on two original characters.

1st Character:
name: Lizzy
age: 14
lives: Columbus, Ohio
story: The Phan Living Next Door
facts: loves Phantom of the Opera and loves Erik. also loves skull, rose, and black items. phan phiction writer. went as Phantom of the Opera for Halloween. loves music!

2nd Character:
name: Cynthia
age: 15
lives: Columbus, Ohio
story: The Phan Living Next Door
facts: older sister to Lizzy. thinks she is overly obsessive over Phantom. loves music. plays The Sims alot.

that's all i've come up with so far.


Erik's Vampire - December 17, 2005 09:51 PM (GMT)
I only have one!

Name: Emily (note: If anyone could give me a good french last name, please do so!) from 'A woman in Black'

Age: About 29

Discription: Dark hair and green eyes. Fading brusies, scars, and red marks on her arms. Dark circles are usally under her eyes.

Personality: When she's around friends she's a little crazy, but very sensitive. A little scared. Is getting a growing feeling for Erik. Is very good friends with Count Fosco (Who just loves attention... and one of my muses who likes to pop ramdomly into my phics...)

ShadowSpinner - December 17, 2005 10:33 PM (GMT)
Calliope- My fave OC, she is slightly off-the wall, a healer with a wicked sense of humor. From Fairy Tales Are Never Quite Right

Magdala- A baby, she's Calliope's little sister, fond of pulling hair and causing explosions.

Olivia- A very proper little girl, also from Fairy Tales, she is a typical seven year old at times, with an adventurus streak.

Miss Montgomery- From Fairy Tales- Tee-hee, I can't tell. Spoilers, and all.

Natalia- The narrarator of Name Game, she knows a lot more than it seems. V. Sarcastic.

daughterofdarkness87 - December 18, 2005 01:11 AM (GMT)
I have a couple that I put in my fanfics... All mostly based off of me (however, one is sue-ish... )

Chrystalynne Ryan
From: My LOST fanfic called "The Diary of a Teenaged Spitfire"
Personality: Moody, but usually upbeat... sometimes.
Traits: Lost her parents, stuck on an island with her uncle (Charlie), is very outdoors-y, really likes Sawyer ... (like I said... sorta sue-ish)

My other characters are so badly written that they don't deserve mention here...:D

waitingforafairytale - December 18, 2005 01:18 AM (GMT)
Well, I don't have any original characters in fanfictions yet that i have put up on my fanfic account, but i have a couple plot bunnies soon to be posted that have original characters, so i'll post them here.

Name: Chii

Story: Deception on the Throne (sorta based off an RPG on a different site; Chii is a character i use in that RPG so i made a plot bunny with the same time period as the rpg and the same character i used in the rpg)

Hair: Long, black hair with red streaks in it

Eyes: black with crimson and gold flecks (it's a magical ability thing that makes them look that way)

Personality: She was captured at 16 and made a slave to be sold in the nearby city (she lived in the woods). She only has one friend; a fellow slave boy her age named Ashim who is Persian. She's not very trusting of anyone ever since her adoptive parents abandoned her at 15 (she doesn't know that they were really captured and murdered before they could reveal the secrets of her past to her and such. i dont wanna post my whole huge plot bunny here because it'll ruin the surprise!). she is very snarky and sometimes downright arrogant, which can get her into trouble. she is very determined when she wants something.
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Name: Ashim

Story: Deception on the Throne (btw, not yet posted)

Hair: short and dark brown

Eyes: blue with flecks of green in them

skin: dark tan

Personality: He is a good judge of character. He likes to help people; he is also very clever and somewhat snarky. He is 16 and was captured at age 14 by the same slave masters that captured Chii when the slave masters were traveling through Persia and found him on the roadside wandering around in a daze covered in soot after his house burned down. his family was thought to be dead (but are they? dun dun dun..... when i post it you'll hafta read it!).
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I also have 2 original characters in a story im working on that is sort of Phantom, but doesn't have any of the original characters in it. Victoria Rossier and Philip du Chagny are the main 2 and then i have like 2 or 3 others that are minor, that are Victoria's parents and Philip's father. And no, Philip's father is not Raoul. It's a few generations after Phantom. ;) But anyways I haven't finished their personality descriptions and such so i can't post them.

THEN I have a likewise situation (havent finished the thread yet) for a vampire story. The 2 characters are Renald and Chantal, 2 vampires. And I haven't figured their last names out yet or their personalities but i wrote the first chapter and i will progress with making their personalities by letting the story take me where it will.

<3 Violet







waitingforafairytale - December 18, 2005 01:20 AM (GMT)
P.S. To Lady Assasin Moonbeam- where did you get that awesome anime thing of christine and erik?! it's so cool!

Mrs. Malfoy - December 18, 2005 02:53 AM (GMT)
ah, i have a new one, actually.

west wing character: count dracula (YAY!...FANGS!)

my character: elizabeth

yay! i'm just starting this story, so i really don't know what i'm going to do with her yet... *evil laugh* :blink:

ShadowSpinner - January 8, 2006 02:38 AM (GMT)
Princess Azeala (really Her Majestic Amagi t'brylony Azealia Morena Elisabetya, but really... :P ) Based off of Kay!Erik in some ways, she is really rather independent, and goes and does her own thing, screw the consequences. From Fairy Tales.

erik's-black-cape - January 8, 2006 04:50 PM (GMT)
I have Charotte Hamilton from my original fiction novel Thornedale Towers. And then there is Xavier, who is also my muse from Warlord, another original piece.

AcanyaHelke - January 8, 2006 09:07 PM (GMT)
Story- Phanta-phied (on FF.net, and hopefully here eventually)

Name- Jen
Age- 16, but ends up 22
Lives- In Texas originally, but ends up in the Paris Opera house
Looks- around 5'9, blue-grey eyes, light brown hair that is slightly messy and about shoulder length, typically wears black, not beautiful nor ugly...just...average...
Description- Jen plays percussion in the Opera Populair orchestra (and in real life), and is slightly unstable. Her temper often conflicts with Erik's, and her main mission is to get him to love her, though he is still attached to Christine. This causes probles, as Jen is rather determined, and clever. She can be less than sane at times, but is typically pretty calm and quiet.

This basically describes Jen in my LotR fic...which isn't up anywhere...I may post it here though, later...



Miss Dusk - January 16, 2006 08:26 PM (GMT)
I have three original characters. Two of them are quite naggy.

Names: Maria Jones and Annette Taylor
Stories: They are in a trilogy so far. They revolve around "The Patriot", "Sleepy Hollow," and "Phantom Of The Opera." In that order.

Personality of Maria: She is very bossy, arrogant, intelligent, annoying, likes to start arguments, very sarcastic, very sharp tongue, and has a problem with keeping her mouth shut.

Pesonality of Annette: She is the more quiet type. She loves reading, writing, singing, and playing the clarinet. She tries to keep Maria in check (tries is the key word). She is very shy but when she gets to know a person she is quick to react with as sharp a tongue as Maria. I notice that Annette seems to be more of a Mary Sue. Jesus Christ, I try so hard and they betray me! Stop being perfect!

Annette: Sorry. I couldn't help it. You created me out of your image you know...
Miss Dusk: Don't get cute.
Maria: *walks in on the conversation munching on a piece of cake* Honestly, if you want us to go away write our story!
Miss Dusk: You'll have to argue with quite a few more people in order for that to happen. *glares at other original character*
Maria: *glares at OC too*
Professor Barbra Ann Humnick walks into room, notices the glaring people: What? :blink:

Okay, Prof. Barbra Ann Humnick I believe you've already met the DBCA.
Humnick: Hi... again.

Name: Professor Barbra Ann Humnick
Story: "Trapped In Handcuffs" in the Severus Snape fandom. The first chapter of TIH is in the Attic and at ff.net

Personality: She is one messed up chick. I won't explain how because that would ruin the story. She has a "thing" for Prof. Snape. She is really a nice person, a little strange and does she love to piss off Snape. It's really quite entertaining to see him get annoyed. She's the new DADA teacher at Hogwarts that gets handcuffed to Snape. It's a rather interesting story, take a gander at it. Hopefully I'll get more reviews and motivation to write and post the next chapter.

Maria: *scoffs* Don't get your hopes up.
Miss Dusk: Will you shut up?
Maria: Nope.
Miss Dusk: Bloody muses.

Kiss_of_Darkness - January 16, 2006 09:19 PM (GMT)
Okay here's mine

Name: Lady Ruth Vyner

Story: Lust In Darkness....centred round Dracula (on ff.net in the same name as well as on here)

Description: Long very dark hair, striking grey eyes. Stunning beauty helps her seduce her victims for her feed. She meets Drac and isnt as easy as he anticipated, got the personality to challenge him alongside the powers....plus being trapped in the victorian aristocratic era she is surprisingly intelligent......... Has Dracula has finally met his match???

Nightshadesister - January 18, 2006 06:13 AM (GMT)
Sage, Seraphine, Leif, Polara, Matthias, Sampson, Drakh, Khanderakh, Alizar, Kalia, Farran etc. The main characters from Restorer, the novel I am writing. Sage is also one of my muses. I'd actually say something about them all, but at the moment, they're all jumbled up in my head- way too many stories going at once!

thephanyourmother warnedyouabout - January 23, 2006 06:47 AM (GMT)
Name: Ella Marwood

Story: "Evening & Angels Falling" in the POTO fandom.

Hair: Red, wavy/curly, but not wildly, I suppose.

Eyes: uuhhhmmm...*has to check because she has been woeful about updating recently* Green. She has green eyes.

Personality: Calm, generally happy, a little shy of strangers, but has an insatiable curiosity and knack for getting into trouble. She can speak a little hastily at times, but only around people she trusts or in extremely trying situations. Fairly reserved. She's been crippled since birth, with one leg shorter than the other and a twisted back. (Don't worry, this doesn't mean she's OMG perfect for Erik's tru wuv! *snerk* As if she would! I mean, I'm nine chapters in and all we've seen of Erik so far is his feet.)

I have major plans for her eventually, if only I could find a reasonable and in-character way for her and Erik to meet, officially. (Even though he's already kind of saved her virtue and gotten her out of the cellars when her candle went out and she got lost. A sneaky one, this Erik. Freakin' duh.)


ShadowSpinner - January 23, 2006 06:25 PM (GMT)
Say hi to my new people, Mallory (the Mad) and Susan.

Mallory's from my in-the-works one shot, A Question of Sanity. Curly dark hair, grey-blue eyes, anorexic (sorta...)

Susan's about seven or so, more a concept character for a VH fic I'm toying with based off the book Matty Groves. I'm not gonna let it out on the net til I finish it, though. ;)

Letters - February 13, 2006 12:15 AM (GMT)
haha, here goes:

story: Jorinda and Joringel
name: Xavier (that's za- vee- ey to you, sir/madam) Jorinda (i <3 grim fairy tales)
age: as old as you see fit
height: 186 cm
weight: 54 kg
eyes: gold/green/blue/lavender
hair: black, straight, butt length
build: tall, thin, pale, paints fingernails/toenails black/grey blue
wears: baggy cargos, geta (google it up) with magenta hanao (again, google), dark blue tank top, black hoodie, aviator goggles, sometimes wears gloves and an eyepatch, likes to carry around a 170cm long stainless steel ribbed fan (it's a weapon! google up 'japanese fan', then just imagine a giant fan almoat as tall as yourself)

haha...

ha...

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letters

ShadowSpinner - March 26, 2006 01:06 AM (GMT)
Oh god...

Sara(lyn) Lee Savage

Hair- Frizzy, red curls

Eyes- Is "fey-eyed" one blue, one hazel.

Other things- Freckles, crooked nose

Sara's been dying to have her own story, and a comment on LJ about the lack of supernatural NCIS fic spawned, oddly enough, a Mummy/NCIS crossover. That and DiNozzo's Season 2 look, a la suspenders. ;)

Shadow_Singer - March 27, 2006 11:21 PM (GMT)
Alright my first OC! :D

Story: The Mask

Name: Amanda Elizabeth Cameron

Nickname: Crow

Hair: Strait, shouder leath with siver highlights. The highlights are not nutral(sp?).

Eyes: are normally a golden brown, they change to a deep green when ever shes jelous(sp?) or very angry.

Other Things: Amanda is tall and wears glasses. She normally is in the background, never seen nor heard unless she wants to be. If she can magage it she'll always be found with a book.

Age: 17

Personality: Shes kinda crazy, with a touch of sanity. Most of the time you just see the sanity, just do not let her near suger or caffine, it's a very bad idea. Amanda has an incureable(sp?) for knowlege, she'll do nearly anything to get it. She is normally very quite. Just be warned, she has a very short temper. Amanda is often very sarcastic.

Beware, Amanda Cameron has arrived.

cirquechinois - March 28, 2006 01:11 AM (GMT)
My OC's stories can be found here.

Leyla Q'albh

Story: Angel of Allah (POTO)

Background: Persian. Cousin to Nadir (his sister was a concubine to the sultan in Tehran). Met Erik as a child, at a formal event of sorts.

Appearance: Short and skinny, with large dark brown eyes and wavy hair.

Personality: Usually quiet, but talkative once you get to know her.


Erik's Vampire - April 16, 2006 12:46 AM (GMT)
Ok. I have two new one's for a story I might write, if I can find time.

Name: Morgan Le Fay

Background: Supposed 'half-sister' to King Arthur. Grew up around magick and a farm. Practiced the magick arts.

Appearance: Tall, hair like autumn leaves (brownish-reddish) Fay eyed. One emerald, one deep amethyst.

Now her brother.

Name: Eoghan

Background: Brother to Morgan. Also grew up around magick and a farm. Also practiced the magick arts.

Appearance: Tall like Morgan, brown hair and also fay eyed. One brown and the other hazel. They end up changing untill he accepts his gifts and that fays aren't that bad.


echo_of_a_tear - April 29, 2006 04:46 AM (GMT)
Story: The Opera Wench

Name: Tora

Age: 18

Background: Dancer at the Opera Garnier. American by birth, but is in all other aspects and indeed considers herself to be French. Mother died when our heroine was five years old; the child afterwards stowed away on a ship bound for France from America. Sounds Sue-ish, but it's not.

Appearance: Slender build, dark eyes, and very unruly chestnut hair.

Personality: Laughs a lot. Prone to wild imaginings and fantasies. Dislikes rich people immensely. Can't swim to save her life.




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